I thought it would be useful to have a feedback page, just so I could stay on track with my progress and look back at old versions of my work.
First Tutorial 30.11.20
For our first tutorial, Lizzie and I made a presentation each in order to show our progress. We worked together on slides 1-4 as an introduction to our research work we did together.
My slides are from 5-12 and show my initial thought process for this project.
Feedback:
– Research how Crystals grow, use more real life references
– Structure looks slightly out of place
– Not clear what the structure is for
Next steps:
– Research crystals and caves
– Decide on a function for the set
– Simplify the backstory
– Research real Temples
Second Tutorial Presentation 08.12.20
For our first tutorial, Lizzie and I made a presentation each in order to show our progress. We worked together on slides 1-4 as an introduction to our research work we did together.
My slides are from 5-12 and show my initial thought process for this project.
Feedback:
– Nice development
– Work from the mood boards, nice themes
– Refine current designs
– Meditation entrance shape looks a bit dodgy
Next steps:
– Refine designs
– Enhance colour and lighting shown in mood boards
– Finish Storyboards
Formative Assessment Presentation 14.12.20
Feedback:
– “Worked through design process in a considered and thorough manner”
– Spaces work well as a journey
– “Concentrate on a piece of concept art that shows off the set with its most interesting shot”
– Storyboard doesn’t have to be a set of tiny images
Make a board larger amongst the others if more needs to be seen (ref. student work attached)
– Concentrate on one section for blender and refine
– Look at reference images – “Buddha type sculptures from the rock in China”, add an overhang for the Jedi sculptures
– Look at the lighting in the images, change the lighting on the journey through the set
Next steps:
– Make a piece of concept art that shows off the set
– Make storyboards more dynamic
– Add an overhang to the walkway around the statues
– Enhance lighting, link it to the story